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How Successful Writers Keep Their Readers’ Attention

This article aims to help you apply valuable and worthwhile success strategies based on techniques I have used that worked for me.

It's crucial to give your readers what they expect.

It's crucial to give your readers what they expect.

How to Keep Your Readers Interested

Writers need to consider how readers respond to their writing. Give them what they expect from the title, stay focused, and make it useful.

People have a short attention span when browsing for answers. So if they don't get the answer quickly, they move on to another article until they find one that answers their question.

That is why you need to provide instant answers. You can elaborate further in the rest of your article. When a reader is satisfied that you got right to the point, they tend to keep reading to see what else they learn from you.

The idea is that if you get your readers hooked, they will stay for more and finish reading the entire article.

Crucial Points to Consider When Writing

You need to give people what they expect from the title. Stay focused, and eliminate useless words. Proofread several times to detect if you are not following that strategy. That extra effort will be worth your time.

I always find myself making improvements each time I read my own articles. So it will benefit you to make that part of your business.

The most important thing to consider is how your readers respond to your writing.

  • Do they find it helpful?
  • Does it provide the answer they were expecting?
  • Did you deliver on your promise based on your title?
  • Does it hold their attention all the way through by staying focused on what the title says?

These points are the most crucial to remember whenever you are writing something new. If you fail with any of them, it can hurt the success of your content in attracting organic traffic.

Avoid Mistakes That Frustrate Readers

If readers get something worthwhile from your article, they will keep reading to the end. So make sure every paragraph offers value. If you fail at any time, your reader will go away before finishing your entire article.

To be clear, pay attention to your writing from a reader’s point of view and honestly answer these questions:

  • Are you rambling on?
  • Are you going off on tangents?
  • Are you unclear about things?
  • Are you failing to make your point?

Any of these things can cause a reader to become frustrated and leave. That's why you need to focus on keeping their attention.

Use Short and Purposeful Paragraphs

If readers see cluttered paragraphs with no spaces, they tend to feel that there is too much to read, and they will click away before reading further.

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In addition, short paragraphs are easier to comprehend, and spacing between paragraphs helps avoid eye strain.

Also, consider these critical points:

  • It's best to separate your thoughts into blocks of text with meaningful subtitles for each section.
  • It can also be helpful to separate various thoughts into numbered or bulleted paragraphs.
  • Anything that makes it easier for the reader to comprehend what you're talking about is what you need to do. Always keep that in mind.

It's important to avoid words that may be used as incorrect keywords by search engines. That will attract people who are searching for something that's not related. Once they stumble on your page and see it's not what they want, they leave in a hurry.

If too many people click away quickly, search engines take that to mean your article had nothing of value. Search engines monitor how long visitors stay on a web page. They use that information to improve responses to queries. That affects your ranking.

If readers stay for a long time, your content must be valuable and worthwhile. Then you'll get improved ranking and more organic traffic.

When I see a short duration in my stats, I examine the article to discover why I might have lost my readers so fast. Then I make appropriate improvements.

Make Readers Want to Return for More

When you give readers what they want with instant gratification and do not run them around in circles to understand your article, they will be more inclined to remember you as an author with authority.

In addition, when they need to review the information you presented, they will save a link to your content in their favorites.

Having "Repeat Visitors" is an indication of the usefulness of your article. Google keeps track of that to rank your content.

If people are coming back, Google knows you have content that they found helpful. Therefore, they bump up your ranking. That helps your article appear higher on the search results page (SERPs), and you get more organic traffic.

Me — proofreading my work.

Me — proofreading my work.

Check Your Spelling and Grammar Before Publishing

Poorly constructed sentences, poor grammar, and misspellings negatively affect your ranking. So use a spell checker before you publish and proofread several times.

An error I often see people make is the incorrect spelling of "alot" – There is no such word in English. The correct term is "a lot" as two words.

I see that mistake is made a lot. I bet if you allot more time to spell checking, you’ll do better with ranking. Ahh, did you catch that? The word “allot” with two L's is a valid word with an entirely different meaning.

I also find many people confusing "there” and “their” and “they’re.” There are times when they're not paying attention to their spelling.

We all make mistakes. And that's why we need to check our work carefully before considering it worthy for the public.

Proofread Several Times

When we proofread our material, we tend to see what we thought we wrote rather than what we typed. So that shows how important it is to have someone else proofread it for us.

I find it helpful to reread my articles many months later. I guess that works because we tend to see the words in a different light—as if we’re reading them for the first time.

When I read something I wrote long ago, I usually notice improvements I can make. So I’m frequently refining my published articles. It will be well worth your time to consider doing that too.

Google Analytics Reports Provide Vital Information

Your Google Analytics Reports show you where visitors came from, what keywords they used to find you, how long they stayed, and where they went next.

I often review the stats and look for problems such as short view duration. That means I lost the reader before they got through the article, and I need to work on it to make improvements.

To review the stats on any particular article, follow these steps in your Google Analytics account:

  1. Change the time period in the top right corner to cover the days or months you want to review.
  2. Click on Behavior → Site Content → All Pages
  3. Select an article you want to check.

You’ll see a graph showing page views over the period you had selected, similar to the example below. Columns of data below the graph provide additional information. The most valuable data are total page views, unique page views, average time on page, and bounce rate.

Example Google Analytics Report of One Article Over Four Months

Example Google Analytics Report of One Article Over Four Months

Keep a Log of Changes for Future Reference

It's helpful to keep a log of changes so you can review what you did the next time you update an article.

When I examine the page views graph, I sometimes discover that Google traffic dropped several months ago. That's valuable information. I go to my log of changes and check to see if I did something that might have messed it up at that time.

You can keep a log of changes any way you prefer. I'll give you two examples. I use both of these methods:

1. Use a Note File for Log of Changes

I use a note file to keep a list of the articles where I made changes. Every entry includes the date, title, and description of my changes. For example, I make a note of what I did, such as:

  • Changed title.
  • Changed summary.
  • Added new content.
  • Corrected spelling and grammar.
  • Added keywords suggested by Google.
  • Added or changed images used in the article.

Later, I can review this log and compare it to the traffic changes to discover what worked and what failed.

2. Use an Excel Spreadsheet for a Log of Changes

I also keep an excel spreadsheet of all my articles showing word count, publish date, last change date, and other useful items to keep tabs on, such as if I shared it on social media.

You might want to adjust the information you keep in your log as you begin to see which items help you keep track of changes better. For example, sometimes I feel the need to keep track of some specific type of change I do to many articles. So I add another column to the spreadsheet to track it.

That may sound like a lot of work, but the information accumulated from this effort is a goldmine. I put as much time into this as I do writing new articles. I’m always learning something new that Google reacts to from my activity.

Watch Your Readers in Real-Time View

I sometimes eavesdrop on my readers by watching Google Analytics Real-time View. That gives me an idea of what people are doing.

I can see all my articles that are being read at the moment. I can see if readers pop in and out quickly or if they are actually reading. Sure, maybe they left the computer while leaving it on the screen. But that's a small piece of the statistics data.

Watching the activity of readers in real-time helps me decide if modifications are needed.

A Snapshot of My Real-Time View in Google Analytics

A Snapshot of My Real-Time View in Google Analytics

Use Images Correctly and Legally

The main image should represent your subject matter. It provides a quick way to show the reader what it's about before they start reading. You should include images to help the reader understand the subject rather than haphazardly having them just for eye candy.

Google Images May Be Copyrighted

I avoid selecting images from Google Images. But if you find one you want to use, follow the links to the actual source and check on its license. Never use images from the web that may be copyrighted.

Creative Commons Has Rules

If you use Creative Commons License images, give the proper credit. Creative Commons has rules. Sometimes they require that you display a credit to the originator.

Pixabay and Unsplash are Free for Commercial Use

Many image sites indicate how you need to include a credit reference. Some image sites, such as Pixabay, do not require attribution. However, I still like to be courteous to the photographer. Besides, it helps maintain authority.

Both Pixabay and Unsplash licenses allow posting on sites where you earn revenue. That's what it means to be free for commercial use.

Always include proper attribution with images.

Always include proper attribution with images.

Watch Out for Plagiarism and Send a Takedown Request

If traffic suddenly slows down on a good article, it might have been copied. I use Google Alerts to monitor for plagiarism by placing a couple of random sentences from my articles into each alert.

When I find a copy anywhere, I send a takedown notice to the hosting service of the domain under the provisions of the Digital Millennium Copyright Act.

I have a pet peeve about the way I see people confusing a takedown notice with legislation that gives us legal rights. For example, I notice that many people say they sent a DMCA. But they actually mean they sent a takedown notice under the provisions of Section 512(c) of the DMCA.

To Conclude

Google bots continually monitor view duration and the return rate of each reader. If the results are positive, then they keep increasing your ranking.

With the methods I described, you will keep your readers focused and show search engines that you have quality content, so they keep sending more traffic to your articles.

This content is accurate and true to the best of the author’s knowledge and is not meant to substitute for formal and individualized advice from a qualified professional.

© 2009 Glenn Stok

Reader Comments

Glenn Stok (author) from Long Island, NY on July 31, 2019:

Vivian Coblentz - The comments people leave are overlooked by many writers. But Google bots can’t tell the difference and will include it in the content ranking. It’s one of the easiest jobs to tackle, cleaning up low quality and off topic comments.

Vivian Coblentz on July 31, 2019:

I had no idea the comment section could affect Google ranking, so thanks for that tip. I'm intimidated by technology and have never tackled Google Analytics, but your step-by-step instructions make it sound easy, so maybe I will give it a try.

ValKaras on March 03, 2018:

Glenn---From a writer's point of view it may only be a hobby, meaning that they don't primarily look at it as a source of income---BUT---yes, as you say, in the view of Google it's a business and nothing but.

So, in order to justify our presence on Google's pages we have to respect their rules, and for doing that, your advices come as a godsend, because they contain practically all that we should keep in mind.

I understand that "freedom of literary expression" may, and does mislead many a writer into becoming sloppy and not caring about the reader's interests and their taste for artful presentation.

So, whether we treat our writing as a hobby or as our source of income--like the saying goes: "If anything is worth doing, it's worth doing it right."

Glenn Stok (author) from Long Island, NY on November 05, 2017:

Anusha Jain - You really got it! That’s great. I always have to keep that in mind when writing articles.

And a month or two after publishing, I always check the search arguments Google shows that were being used. If I see something wrong, I make changes to compensate for it.

Anusha Jain from Delhi, India on November 05, 2017:

Glenn, I think you have included some very valid points here. I especially resonate with "Don't Attract the Wrong Readers". This can happen inadvertently if the author is not being careful.

Online writing is very different from that required in traditional articles. Metaphors, analogies were considered to be a very good medium of explaining something to the readers. However, the Search Engines may pick up wrong audiences for us because of words or phrases which were not meant to be "keywords" for this article. And once the visitors realize their mistake, they obviously don't waste any time and hurry away, spoiling the bounce rate for us. So we really have to be careful while creating our posts.

Glenn Stok (author) from Long Island, NY on December 07, 2014:

Jlbowden - Ha ha. Thanks for that humorous ending to your comment Jim. Those are indeed very realistic grammar issues we see sometimes.

James Bowden from Long Island, New York on December 07, 2014:


Thank you for sharing this really good to know information, for all writers from different walks of life. It's funny how we often forget about the correct usage of they're, their and there isn't it.

And something as simple as separating the A from Lot, which a lot of us our often guilty of doing. And you forgot one of my old foes - Then and Than. Those two words can be confusing to many in placing correctly within a sentence.

But overall a great refresher for everyone using the English language on a daily basis with added reminders on how to catch and keep our readers attention early on in our articles

Again thanks for sharing this awesome article which I also thought deserved a Siskel & Ebert - two thumbs up! (;


Donna Cosmato from USA on December 01, 2011:

Hey,'re welcome! I love alliteration and word plays. They are such fun and they spice up writing, don't you think? That is just one of the many reasons I enjoy reading your hubs so much:)

Glenn Stok (author) from Long Island, NY on November 27, 2011:

DonnaCosmato ~ Thanks so much for your perceptive comments. It means a lot to me to be reviewed by a contributing editor such as you.

Thanks for adding "it's" vs "its" - that is also one of my pet peeves too. I see it much too often and it's troubling to see good authors who make this mistake without considering its effect on otherwise quality Hubs.

I appreciate the vote up. Thanks for that and for your comments.

Donna Cosmato from USA on November 27, 2011:

Hi Glenn, this is another great article with lots of great advice. Just to answer a question that you cleverly embedded in the text, I think you did an awesome job of keeping my attention without boring me to death.

As a contributing editor for another site, I'd like to send you a thousand virtual kudos for the section on proofreading and grammar mistakes.

The only one you did not include is my personal pet peeve, which is using "it's" when one should use "its" and vice versa.

It's a shame (yes it is) that with all the free software programs and spellcheckers on the market so many freelance writers still publish work that is full of grammatical errors and misspelled words.

Anyway, it has taken me this long to process and put to good use the information from your hub on how to raise your hub score (it is working well, thank you for the tips.) Now I'm looking forward to watching my bounce rate decline as I use the valuable tips you have provided here.

I voted this up in hopes it will increase the popularity of this excellent tutorial and many more people can benefit from it.

Kindest regards,


Andrew Grosjean from Detroit on December 25, 2009:

Thanks for the info. I have been plugging along here for about 2 months and this was insightful. I loved that bit about "alot" "a lot" and "allot." LOL.


EngagementRing from Los Angeles on December 21, 2009:

Great hub Glenn! I think when you are doing SEO you concentrate more on getting people to your site than actually keeping there. This made me realize that I need to focus on both.

CMHypno from Other Side of the Sun on December 18, 2009:

Thanks for all the great info Glenn. I must admit that my favourite part of Google Analytics is looking at the map of where people come from! Congratulations on your HubNugget nomination!

Glenn Stok (author) from Long Island, NY on December 18, 2009:

Anath, I get lost with it too. Just take your time and click around the left-hand column in Google Analytics. That's how I discovered all this various information and charts. Over time, you will make some sense out of all the data and you'll start seeing patterns.

An interesting pattern is how many readers come back and when. I noticed by reviewing the Visitor Loyalty table, I see that roughly 47% are new people each day. 38% revisit in the same day and only 3% the come back next day. Then it drops until 15 to 30 days later, when old visitors come back and look again. I guess it might mean that I have readers who are remembering me and curious to see what's I've done since their last visit, or need to check out something they previously read. Either way, I find that encouraging.

I also see that I have a large number of bounces. Those are people who hit a hub and left in a few seconds. That's why I feel these reports are so important to use, even if they are difficult.

Anath on December 18, 2009:

I get lost every time I look at Google Analytics. There is so much information in there that I don't really know what to look for and what to do with it. I am sure I could be using it for my benefit but it is still an unknow field to me.

Thanks for all the other tips, interesting the effect of unique vs. repeat visits.

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